Needs much more on city sounds - SF, NYC, Miami, Seattle Needs to include Go-go and gentrification, Slate article Needs to include Che article The Mennel citation does not make sense where it currently is in your paper Needs more clarity on history of Hong Kong cinema Need to connect Bollywood to cities Some major language usage and clarity issues Hayes reference does not make sense where it is in your paper Do not include Turley reading Because you do not include multiple required readings, this will be a zero for now