"Your application must include a personal statement of no more than 500 words. It should describe your personal motivation to undertake further study, and can include details of your personal circumstances as well as your life and work experiences. It should emphasise any aspect of your personal history that may enhance your application, including extra-curricular activity, community involvement, work experience, relevant personal characteristics and any outstanding achievements." Could you help for editing my draft. I am going to apply for the Master of Management (Finance) which Finance is the specialization.