Empty spaces means that they needs to be filled out with problems like homelessness or pollutions etc. Problems needs to be develop as well, with which they struggle NYC residents. Please also annotated NYC essay. Please see attached" THE 4 -5 PARAGRAPH BASIC ESSAY STRUCTURE" both format for 2 essays. For childhood essay problems is the same structure like in NYC essay. Filled out with problems and develop them. Both essays are 4 paragraphs essays.