A 1000 words thesis introduction. Topic: Effect of group TranS-C on insomnia and depression comorbid patients As I receive minimal guidance from my professor, I don't have much idea on how to write a thesis. Nevertheless, I have written an introduction to my thesis based on some templates I found online, but it still doesn't look right. So I hope someone here can help me edit and amend my essay. Here are some elements that I would like you to edit: - wordings- tone (more formal and academic) - grammar - structure - citation - content (anything I should add or delete) - word count (the limit is 1000 words but now I have 1700 words) etc. Please feel free to contact me if there is any information you need from my study to fix my essay. Thank you so much.