1. Please proofread word by word, making sure no grammatical and sentence structure mistakes (especially, tense, plurals, singulars, prepositions). Please proofread carefully!  2. Please help paraphrase the sentences highlighted in yellow. Only those parts highlighed in yellow are required to paraphrase.  3. ***Use the template, DON'T change anything of this template, only edit whatever necessary.  4. To summarise:  - Proofread the whole piece word by word carefully.  - Edit when necessary (If no English language mistake, no need to re-write)  - Only paraphrase those parts highlighted in yellow.